Is this thing on?
So if this thing is working right (Just testing), you should see an actual, honest to goodness PICTURE just to the left of these fancy shmancy words. If not, well, …
Month: September 2008
Revision: Elephant Shoes
The Elephant Shoes story has been revised rather substantially. I think the new version has improved greatly in both the language (big reduction on “and” usage) and the development of …
Revision: Birth Pains
Birth Pains is a story that intrigued me, yet I wasn’t happy with it even when I posted it. I’m still not 100% happy with it, but it does seem …
Revision: The Death of the Death of Death
I have made some significant revisions to The Death of the Death of Death, which I believe tighten up the story (I swear, that’s a technical term) a good deal …
Elephant Shoes
When Ashraf came down the stairs in his suit and tie he smiled at Kaitlin with a devious grin and exclaimed “I don’t know what’s gotten into you lately, but …